Clocks bend and drip in a painting by Salvador Dali

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How is time organized in a novel? We were discussing the organizing principle(s) for a novel recently in one of my writing groups. Today I thought about a few books that I read recently and how they were […]
Sunrise on an autumn day as viewed through tree trunks and yellow leaves

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2025 was an amazing year for writing. In January, I finished the first draft of the novel I’ve been working on since 2021. In March, I dove into a ten-month class on novel revision. A second draft was […]
A man sits at a desk in front of a typewriter and holds his head in his hands

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Brooding over the question of why werewolves bite.
A man sits at a desk in front of a typewriter and holds his head in his hands

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The class critique of my first-draft manuscript is over – now the work begins for a second revision! The critique entailed receiving feedback in the form of letters and annotations on the manuscript – eight people’s feedback, our […]
A man sits at a desk in front of a typewriter and holds his head in his hands

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Genre in fiction can be a slippery beast. Sometimes I don’t know what to say when people ask me in what genre I write. I usually say that I am broadly writing in the fantasy genre. Sometimes I […]
Cover image of the book Artful Sentences: Syntax as Style by Virginia Tufte

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My reading for the week has been a book on syntax, and it is delightful. You might think that a sentence that contains both “syntax” and “delightful” is somehow in error. Artful Sentences: Syntax as Style by Virginia […]
Pictures of four album covers with the words Blue Moon

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Several years ago, one of my writing buddies asked me if I had a playlist for the novel-in-progress. “A what?” I asked. “Is that a thing?” Turns out it was a thing. Inspired by my friend Jeff, who […]
A child joyously bursts through the tape of the finish line of a race.

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Last week I finished the first draft of the novel. I finished the last scene — that is, I filled out the final “sketch” — and called it a first draft. A bright line is useful, if for […]
Scrabble tiles on a blue background

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In November, I decided to “sketch” the remaining sixteen scenes in my first draft without worrying about details like verb tense or punctuating dialogue. Then in mid-December, I began the work of finishing those scenes—and I’m almost done. […]
Runners in a track race near a ribbon that signifies the finish line

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I spent the past week finishing the final scene of the book. The time and place for the scene were present in the primeval outline of 2021, but the contents have shifted around quite a lot as I […]